雅思作文求批改,顺便打分题目somepeoplethinkthatthedetailedcriminaldescriptiononnewspaperandtvhasbadinfluences,sothiskindofinformationshouldberestrictedonthemedia,towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Thankstot

　　雅思作文求批改,顺便打分

　　题目somepeoplethinkthatthedetailedcriminaldescriptiononnewspaperandtvhasbadinfluences,sothiskindof informationshouldberestrictedonthemedia,towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

　　Thankstothesky-rocketingadvancementinmediatechnologyandtelecommunication,theinformationexplosionisinfluencingnearlyeveryaspectoflifeonthisplanetandatthesametime,somenegativeinformation,likedetailedcriminaldescriptionsonnewspaperandTV,isconsideredtoresultinrisingcrimes.Therefore,somethinkthiskindofinformationshouldberemovedfromthemedia.Butpersonally,Iamopposedinthisrestriction.

　　Thosewhofeelthatthecensorshipisnecessarymightarguethatthesedetailedreports,bystatistics,docontributedirectlytorisingcopycatcrimes.Obviously,potentialcriminalswouldhaveeasyaccesstothecriminalskills,rangingfromschemingtoescaping,ifthedetailscouldbefoundonthemassmedia.Furthermore,inspiredbytheviolencebroadcast,potentialcriminalscouldbecomemoreaggressiveandactsimilarly,thusleadingtosocialinstability.

　　However,theargumentsabovefailtosupporttherestrictionpolicywhenwetaketheInternetintoconsideration.Instead,wewouldfindthattherestrictiononcriminalinformationmightmakethesituationevenmoredifficult.Asisknowntoall,theinformationonline,unlikethatonnewspaperandTV,isalmostoutofcontrol.Still,potentialcriminalscouldgetskilledandencouragedwhethertherestrictionpolicyiscarriedout.What'sworse,mostofusarelesslikelytoreceiveacertainpieceofinformationthroughtheInternetthanthenewspaperorTVifwedonotintendtoseekforit.Butthehiddencriminalswanttheinformationbadlyandinthisway,theyarebetterinformedthanus.Consequently,crimeswouldbecomemoreharmfultothegeneralpublicthatarenotprepared.

　　Inconclusion,itistruethatthedetailedcriminaldescriptionsonthemediadohavebadinfluences,buttherestrictionwouldnotworkasexpectedsincetheInternetiswidelyused.Soweshouldlookforothermethodstoreducecrimes.