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DearPeter
Howarethingsgoing?
LastweekItookpartintheshowof“BeautifulVillagesaroundBeijing”inourschool.OnSundaymorningmyparentsandIwenttothesuburbstogetsomeinformationformyposter.Onarrivingatthedestinationwewereimpressedbythebeautifulsceneryandpeople'slivingconditions.Itookmanyphotos.Thenwechattedwithafarmerwhotoldusaboutthechangestheseyears.Theynowcangetonlinetolearnagriculturalscienceandtradetheirproducts.Andinsparetimetheycanenjoyvariousleisureactivitieslikeplayingtabletennisandchess.ThenextdayIputmypicturesandanarticleontheschoolwallnewspaper.Ifeelproudofthedevelopmentofourcountry.
Dokeepintouch.
Bestwishes
LiHua
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