帮我检查一下这几篇短文中有没有语法错误,拼写错误,意思不通等一(IwasborninTianjin.It’sinthenorthofChina.Therearenineriversthroughthecity.ThemostfamousriverisHaihe.It’sabeautifulriver.Youcantake
帮我检查一下这几篇短文中有没有语法错误,拼写错误,意思不通等
一(IwasborninTianjin.It’sinthenorthofChina.Therearenineriversthroughthecity.ThemostfamousriverisHaihe.It’sabeautifulriver.Youcantakeaboatalongtheriverandseethebeautifulview.PeopleinTianjinareveryfriendlyandkind.TianjinisfamousforFoodStreet.YoucantastelotsofdeliciousfoodintheFoodStreet.GuWenHuaJieisalsofamous.youcanbuyalotofthingsinthisstreet.WelcometoTianjin.Thereisalotofinterestingplacestovisit.)
二(Thankyouforyouletter.NowI’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmid-autumnday.It’sonthe15thaugust.Everyyearwhentheholidaycomes.Wewillhaveonedayoff.Wewilleatmooncake.It’saverydeliciousfood.Wealsogououtforawalktoseetheroundmoonintheevening.Manyfamilywillgettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Wewillenjoyourselvesinthatday.It’sainterestingholiday.)
三还有这篇(IwillspendmysummerholidayinBeijing.Itisthecapitalcityofchina.Therearealotoffamousandinterestingplaces.Themostfamousplaceisthegreatwall.Itisverybeautiful.Iwanttoclimbuptoitfirst.ThenIwillvisittheForbiddenCity.IalsowanttovisitBeiHaipark.IftheisclearIwillclimbuptobaitaandseethewholepark.
Iwillstaytherefortwodays.Ithinkitwouldbeawonderfulholiday.)