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  【帮我看下我写的这篇英语作文可能有很多地方错了请帮我改改谢谢helloeverbody!RecentlymyEnglishcanimpovealotsinveihavesomeexperenceFirst,IinsistonreadingEnglishloudlyeverymoringforhalfanhour.itcansmak】

  帮我看下我写的这篇英语作文可能有很多地方错了请帮我改改谢谢

  helloeverbody!

  RecentlymyEnglishcanimpovealotsinveihavesomeexperence

  First,IinsistonreadingEnglishloudlyeverymoringforhalfanhour.itcansmakeyoufindagoodsinseofEnglishbetter.

  Second,IusuallylistentosomeEnglishsongsortapeswheniamfreeorhavingdinner.ItisagoodwaytoimproveyourinterestinEnglish.

  Third,ifyouarefreeattheweekend.youcangototheEnglishcornerwhichisaclubofEnglishcommunicating

  cantrainyourEnglishtoo,andimproveveryquicklyithink.

  Lastbutnotleast,youcanfindmanydifferentwaystolearnthenewwordsasthewordsisthekeytoimproveyourenglish.Forexample,youcanreadsomeEnglishnovelseverdaywhichisyoucanunderstandeasiely.listeningtoEnglishsongsandrememberwhichthemsayingassoonasposibleandsoon.

  Ithinkifyoucandoyoubestandinsistonexercising,youwillsuccessinEnglishfinally!

  Rememberbelieveinyourself

  Thinks~

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2020-09-07 05:41
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李柔刚

  RecentlymyEnglishcanimpovealotsinveihavesomeexperence时态错,用现在完成时,hasimprovedalot.Ihavesomethingtosharewithyouasfollows.

  loudly->aloud(前者强调是噪音,后者是大声)

  everymorning分开写,不要连一起

  itcansmakeyoufindagoodsinseofEnglishbetter.cans?you?good?better?->ItenablesmetofindabettersenseofEnglish.

  usually/some这里不要连用,经常听一些歌,去掉some吧,后面又是your,改成my,统一人称的称谓

  你通篇的称谓一会儿i/me,一会儿you/your的,太乱了,该什么用什么!

  Third,ifyouarefreeattheweekend.youcangototheEnglishcornerwhichisaclubofEnglishcommunicatingcantrainyourEnglishtoo,andimproveveryquicklyithink.->Third,IgototheEnglishCorneronweekends,agatheringplaceforpeopletocommunicateinEnglish,whichhelpsalotformyEnglishimprovement.

  接下来一段:I'vefoundmanydifferentwaystomemorizenewwordsasthewordsisthekeyto(to是介词,后面跟名词)fluentEnglish.Forexample,IreadEnglishnovelseverdaywhichIcanunderstandwithouttoomuchdiffculties.你这里上面不是说过听歌了,为什么又出现了?我没改,最好去掉listeningtoEnglishsongsandrememberwhichthemsayingassoonasposibleandsoon.

  Ithinkifyoucan(不要can)doyou(改成your)bestandinsistonexercising(andpractisingasIdo),youwill(certainly)success(这是名词,要用动词succeed)inEnglishstudyfinally!Rememberbelieveinyourself记住相信自己,记住去做某事,remembertodo...->Doremember(加Do表示强调语气)tobelieveinyourself.

  Thinks~->这个单词也能拼错?

2020-09-07 05:41:43
陈秀珍

  非常非常地感谢你~~~thanks~~~⊙﹏⊙b汗

2020-09-07 05:46:24

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