【修改英语作文（初中）AdangeroushobbyComputerisveryusefulinourlives.However,moreandmoreteenagersenjoyplayingthecomputergamesverymuch.Someofthemplaythecomputerdayandnight.Theyevenforgettohavefood.Whentheyareat】

　　修改英语作文（初中）

　　Adangeroushobby

　　Computerisveryusefulinourlives.However,moreandmoreteenagersenjoyplayingthecomputergamesverymuch.Someofthemplaythecomputerdayandnight.Theyevenforgettohavefood.Whentheyareatschool,theyonlythinkaboutthegamesandtheycan’tstudywell.Theycannolongergetridofit.Thenevencan’tcontrolthemselves.Atlast,theywillbeinsaneandabnormal.

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