帮我看看这段话有没有什么错误?Iwritetheletterforappreciatingthatyouhavegivenaraisetomesincethismonth.IworkedinArtechformorethan1year,andthisismyfirstjobaftergraduating.Actually,Ilovethisjobsomuch,becau

　　帮我看看这段话有没有什么错误?

　　Iwritetheletterforappreciatingthatyouhavegivenaraisetomesincethismonth.IworkedinArtechformorethan1year,andthisismyfirstjobaftergraduating.Actually,Ilovethisjobsomuch,becauseIamaoutgoinggirl,andIthinkIamgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.SoIhavealwaysthoughtthatHRismybestcareerchoice.IhaveseenmanypeopleleftfromArtech,includeourpreviousboss,ourpreviousrecruitingmanager,ourpreviousaccountant.SoIfeelveryhonouredthatIamtheoldestoneinArtech.

　　Doyouremeberwhatthethinghappenedon14thMarch.Wecontinuedtoreceivethecallforhalfanhour,onepersoncalledeveryrecruiterformanytimes,butheld10secondsandnospeaking.Sowewereverycurious,andtalkedwitheachothers.Imentionedyournameatthattime"Abhijitdon'tknowwhatwearedoing".Ijustwanttoexplainthatthing.Hopeyounotmisunderstandme.

　　Icanunderstandyousomuch,youareourmanager,needtotakeonalltheresponsiblityofourdailywork.andmaybechinaisalsoastrangecountrytoyou.Youmustbeverytriedeveryday.

　　Sofeelfreetocontactmeifyouwant,IcanhelpyoutodealwithmanythingsifIcould.AndIwillalwayssupportyouforthework.Hopewearefriendsallthetime.

　　Intheend,thanksagainforthesalaryhiketome.

　　那怎么才不算是中国式英语